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Monday 4 December 2017

Bob the dog



Intro:This story is about a named Bob and his friend Mark one day they went to the park and then a bird flew into his mouth.

Body:One day their was a dog named Bob and his best buddy Mark.First they went to the park and they wanted to play so they went and played.Suddenly one little yellow bird flew into Bob the dog’s mouth.BLURB!! Went Bob with yellow feathers coming out of his mouth.Next the little yellow bird spoke and he said “My name is Jeremy” then he couldn’t get out so Bob the dog wailed and howled because he wanted the Jeremy to get out.So they gathered all their friends Roger the rabbit,Cathy the cat and Oscar the owl then they tried so many things so the bird can get out.Firstly Cathy the cat tried blowing pepper up Bob’s noise to make Jeremy come out with a sneeze.AH… AH…  AHCHOO!!   But it didn’t work it just made him fall over!.Then Roger the rabbit tried bouncing on Bob’s belly to make Jeremy pop out with a burp.Boing!  Boing! Boing!   But that didn’t work,it just made Bob feel sick!  Then Oscar the owl tried shaking Bob, to make Jeremy fall out.  WHOO AH   ARGH  BLARGH! But that didn’t work either it just made Bob the dog sick.Finally Jeremy’s mum came and opened Bob's mouth and yelled at Jeremy to come because she was looking for him to clean up his room then Jeremy came out but he didn’t want to clean his room so the mum said “ if you don’t want to clean your room you can clean Bob’s room.So Jeremy promised to don’t sneak out also go somewhere.

Conclusion:I think that this story is cool for kids also it is a bit funny too.

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